I hope you aren't suggesting jumping from one character's internal dialog straight to another's in the same scene. The power of 3rd person limited POV is in the restriction: we see through these eyes now and those eyes later.
I hope you aren't suggesting jumping from one character's internal dialog straight to another's in the same scene. The power of 3rd person limited POV is in the restriction: we see through these eyes now and those eyes later.
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